Wednesday, November 19, 2008

I would have been Happier..

I would have been happier

I would have been happier
if unable to understand,
What someone kept thinking
under infamous foeish brand.

I would have been happier
if someone could feel my tone.
When I never said or
when those words left me alone.

I would have been happier
if someone wouldn’t hesitate,
To let me read the pages of smiles
and sighs inscribed in his book of fate.

But, I should have been happier
even if this doesn’t turn true.
When white is a plain colour,
made out of a seven hue.

***
Savla Viral L.

4 comments:

haritha said...

heya nice poem.....
really professional..short yet worthed for applause..
haritha

Pramod Kumar Kush ''tanha" said...

But, I should have been happier
even if this doesn’t turn true.
When white is a plain colour,
made out of a seven hue.

-You said it all...very touchy and nicely expressed poetry...
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Shivam said...

nice! simple and reflective!

Viral Savla said...

guys, thank u for ur valuable comments..

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