Tuesday, November 18, 2008

Better

Better

I knew myself as a person,
always better than the other.
For my words: I expected respect;
For others’, I never offered a bother.

Being a poet with my pen
fueled by wiser thoughts.
I learnt to cast: myself as an Orchid;
others as the yields of droughts.

‘The One’, bestowed to the civilizations,
with a mission of urgency.
‘The One’, who has to change the world.
Regarding self as ‘The One’ better of supremacy.

Then there were persons to be met,
there were some words to be read.
The words which made me realize
and reconsider what I previously said.

Realizing that I was better.
Better to a person who was ‘Good’.
I was ‘The One’ who was better,
Not the Best, I later understood.

‘The One’, with a mission in hand.
To be accomplished with integrity
‘The One’, who has to bring changes to self,
before blaming the fraternity.

***
Savla Viral L.

4 comments:

Pramod Kumar Kush ''tanha" said...

Being a poet with my pen
fueled by wiser thoughts.
I learnt to cast: myself as an Orchid;
others as the yields of droughts.

-Nice profile with honest thoughts...

Pratz said...

truly nice

Viral Savla said...

thank u, Pramodji for ur valuable comments..
they will help me a lot...

haritha said...

hiiii
hmm.dis poem i liked it a lot..
it was ur true feeling as u said me..n i really feel it is well depicted...
haritha